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Title: In Her Eyes
Author: Trialia
Fandom: Battlestar Galactica (new)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 146
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Laura Roslin, implied Laura/Elosha
Warnings/Spoilers: through season 1
Beta: Cincoflex <3
Summary: What dreams may come...


The chamalla has such strange effects on her mind. She ponders it, wondering if her own subconscious plays much of a part in determining the visions she'll have.

Not all of them are holy.

Elosha had said she'd like Laura to tell her about every one of them she could remember, but she can't do that.

Warm, slippery chocolate skin, soft hair between her fingers, brown eyes wide and dark, lips parted on a gasp of pleasure...

No, not holy at all.

She doesn't know dream from fantasy, hallucination from vision; but at least she can still see reality. The erotic won't lead her and the human race to Earth; those thoughts, no matter where they come from, are not guided by faith.

She may be a prophet - only the gods know for certain - but that lingering hint that she's also still a woman is, for the time being, unimportant.


~fin

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ariestess
Aug. 25th, 2007 05:45 pm (UTC)
Oh my... That was yummy and lovely. I like the idea of Laura not always certain what's fantasy and what's vision/prophecy, but that she knows what to divulge to others.

Is there any chance that I can archive a copy of this [or link to it, your choice] on the BSG page over at Frisked & Conquered?
trialia
Aug. 25th, 2007 06:03 pm (UTC)
I love to get such detailed feedback on what I'm writing, so thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Well, first of all, thanks for the link, it'll make me happy just to trawl the archive! And certainly, you can archive this over there if you want. I'd be honoured! ^_^; My personal archive is at http://dream.unfaithful-mirror.net if you need a source to link, though it needs updating (I've been busy with other stuff). Also, would you mind if I linked that site from the femmeslash fanfiction fanlisting?
ariestess
Aug. 26th, 2007 02:09 pm (UTC)
Have fun with the archive! I am actually working on another big update to the entirety of our archives over at ShatterStorm Productions today, so there will be all sorts of new things on our various subdomains later today.

And you can definitely link to our sites! In fact, I'll do a link back to your fanlisting when I update today as well.
projectcyborg
Aug. 28th, 2007 08:17 pm (UTC)
I love this pairing, and you've executed it flawlessly. I love the entangling of religion and sex.
trialia
Sep. 11th, 2007 10:30 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! Honestly, I think that religion and sex are, in many ways, quite closely linked, so I enjoy being able to explore that through writing Laura.
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